EAT - Comments

So sad! But good! It makes you need to reread it to see Rachel again and how it ties together.

I absolutely loved this story! I really don't know how to describe it! I usually don't read stories because I get addicted, so it is a good thing that this was completed! This story can't be better than it is!

this story is absolutely amazing. I wish you made it longer because I want more but it is fantastic

I only just understood the ending - this story is beautiful:)

This is just like Cassie from Skins, only a little different. I cried when Sid asked her why she didn't eat and how she was able to fool people. This is a great short story :)

Oh my God. You certainly know how to write about what it feels like. Great job. Really.

This was...wow. Beautiful. Incredible. And so emotional, it had me tearing up. I wish it was longer, but it's also perfect just the way it is. Thank you for writing this.

Absolutely, the ending, it even made me cry a little bit. i would love to see this as a bigger story, i feel like i want to know more about Kass:)

SKINS. Major love. Honestly though, this was done beautifully . Absolutely golden . Well done ! xobryn

I am so happy that i saw this and decided to read it. This story is beyond incredible. So brief yet i think i'll remember this forever. I really like how you put the characters in the story. Very nicely done

Gosh, I enjoyed this story too much. Not in a sadistic sort of way-- maybe enjoyed is not the right word-- but you wrote such a heart-demanding topic and you wrote it well. I admire it, and appreciate that you took the time to submit this. I will definitely be looking into your other works.

I don't think there was any possible way to make this story better. Short, sweet (well, not too sweet) and too the point. You added amazing details! Like everyone else is pointing out, the eat being one letter away from fat is just brilliant. I have never noticed it. This story really was just captivating. You can feel Kass's emotions and how she felt so well in this story. It was perfection. Actually, my favorite part was just one like: "Why are you afraid to eat?"

It's not just like why aren't you eating, it's so much more than that, and that's why I love it!

Perfect job on this, you are an amazing writer!

This was amazing i never saw the ending coming!!!! i love this

Eat is one letter away from fat. OMG. That's so interesting, I never picked up on that. Such fantastic writing, this did not disappoint at all, and I am so happy that I clicked on it. :)

Eat is one letter away from Fat... hmm. Interesting story. :) I hope girls get cured from being controlled by food in both ways...there's too many extremes.

I'm guessing you got the idea from Skins. Considering the picture, name, and general storyline. I really like Skins, Cas is my favourite character. It's well wr-itten

This was so good! Honestly, I was crying right when Kass was talking to Carson. It tied together so well! Oh my gosh, I can't get over how good this was! I'm making all my friends read this. Great Job!!!!

Beautiful story you did a fantastic job with this piece the writing style is incredible and the story itself if amazing :)

I was really shocked to read the ending. I'm abashed to say that I had no idea what was coming. The story and the whole plot of it intrigues me. Half because it's truly interesting, and the other for being so relating to the readers especially me.

I guess we all must have our own reasons why we don't eat. And reason on why we should; the good ones though. :) I applaud your story and am simply and honestly in love with it.

I knew it! And, honestly, I would probably act like the mother if I were in her shoes. I'm just not the type of person to give pity to these types of problems.. anorexia, bulimia, and depression. It may be because I don't like talking about emotions in general.
Anyways, you are an amazing writer. Even though I usually don't like these themes, I couldn't stop reading. =]