December 10th, 2010 at 03:56am
A Fabric Slipper is Better Than Glass - Comments
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I hate it when people report a story over something so stupid. Anyways love the chapter, Poor girl, update soon please <3November 28th, 2010 at 05:40pm
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love the update :DNovember 27th, 2010 at 07:40pm
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OMG! I just wanna kill her parents! Update soon please <3November 26th, 2010 at 10:13pm
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Oh my gosh!!!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!! Hurry Hurry HURRY!!!! UI can't wait for more.November 26th, 2010 at 08:58pm
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love the update :D
aww i really dont like her dad :/November 26th, 2010 at 07:03pm -
Love it. I'm sure he wouldn't have said that if he know what the consequences for her were. Poor girl, update soon please <3November 26th, 2010 at 10:23am
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love the update :DNovember 26th, 2010 at 08:54am
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Oh My Goodness. He's so jealous!!!! Why didn't he just shut up? Gosh He's so mean. I love this story, even though it has just started!!!! I can't wait for more! :-D
UPDATE SOON!November 26th, 2010 at 06:06am -
I LOVE THIS! Update please <3November 14th, 2010 at 01:03am
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love the update :DNovember 11th, 2010 at 08:13am
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i love this so far :D its beautiful :DOctober 14th, 2010 at 11:03pm
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lol I like this!!!! very nice job!!!October 13th, 2010 at 01:12am
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This was really good. I like how you're writing about the golden girl.
Can't wait to read moreOctober 11th, 2010 at 12:13am
Btw, there is a thing you can use to show characters. It's under stories on your home page, titled, aptly enough, Characters. You can post the picture, their age, sexual orientation and a short summary about them on that little page and readers can access it through a link beside comments and summary and subscription. Just a little tidbit. ;D
Also, you've done this at least a dozen times the last nine chapters: put their instead of there. It's not that big of a deal, but it's grating my inner English nerd. I'd appreciate it if you checked for that next time you're writing.
I really like the story, and I hope to read more soon. =D