A Fabric Slipper is Better Than Glass - Comments

  • Dorkiness

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    I couldn't breathe when I read the abuse scene. This is really good, keep writing, please.

    Btw, there is a thing you can use to show characters. It's under stories on your home page, titled, aptly enough, Characters. You can post the picture, their age, sexual orientation and a short summary about them on that little page and readers can access it through a link beside comments and summary and subscription. Just a little tidbit. ;D

    Also, you've done this at least a dozen times the last nine chapters: put their instead of there. It's not that big of a deal, but it's grating my inner English nerd. I'd appreciate it if you checked for that next time you're writing.

    I really like the story, and I hope to read more soon. =D
    December 10th, 2010 at 03:56am
  • Felicia_Selina

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    I hate it when people report a story over something so stupid. Anyways love the chapter, Poor girl, update soon please <3
    November 28th, 2010 at 05:40pm
  • rivals are insane

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    love the update :D
    November 27th, 2010 at 07:40pm
  • Felicia_Selina

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    OMG! I just wanna kill her parents! Update soon please <3
    November 26th, 2010 at 10:13pm
  • mama-val

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    Oh my gosh!!!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!! Hurry Hurry HURRY!!!! UI can't wait for more.
    November 26th, 2010 at 08:58pm
  • rivals are insane

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    love the update :D
    aww i really dont like her dad :/
    November 26th, 2010 at 07:03pm
  • Felicia_Selina

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    Love it. I'm sure he wouldn't have said that if he know what the consequences for her were. Poor girl, update soon please <3
    November 26th, 2010 at 10:23am
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    love the update :D
    November 26th, 2010 at 08:54am
  • mama-val

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    Oh My Goodness. He's so jealous!!!! Why didn't he just shut up? Gosh He's so mean. I love this story, even though it has just started!!!! I can't wait for more! :-D
    UPDATE SOON!
    November 26th, 2010 at 06:06am
  • Felicia_Selina

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    I LOVE THIS! Update please <3
    November 14th, 2010 at 01:03am
  • rivals are insane

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    love the update :D
    November 11th, 2010 at 08:13am
  • rivals are insane

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    i love this so far :D its beautiful :D
    October 14th, 2010 at 11:03pm
  • bLuLoVeR33

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    lol I like this!!!! very nice job!!!
    October 13th, 2010 at 01:12am
  • WhoAmIReally?

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    This was really good. I like how you're writing about the golden girl.Smiley

    Can't wait to read more Smiley
    October 11th, 2010 at 12:13am