Untouchable - Comments

Chapter 19-- Interesting way to end a story. Gosh, everything is falling apart. Actually, everything DID fall apart. That means everything only has to go up. Hopefully =].

Chapter 18-- Woah. What a way to come back, haha. So much drama going on. Kellan needs to just calm down and realize all what's going on while he's levelheaded. Him and Selena need to be together. And Tyler and Emma too!

Awwwuhh make them make up :'( Especially Selena and Kellan :)

OH MY GOSH, I CAN'T BELIEVE IT'S OVER.
This is the best story i've ever read, the best drama and the best shared story.
oh god, i'm shitting in my pants because of this chilling ending.
i'm so excited for the next chapter.
you two girls are wonderful, and are extremely talented with writing.
it was just so beautiful and so intriguing. the plot was well thought out and the characters were so similar to the actual people, selena gomez and emma roberts. (haha well i'm not sure about that).
But in total I would just like to say that this was amazing and I'm extremely excited for the sequal.
you two should be proud of yourself. :D

EPICNESS!!!!!!!!! WHAT WHAT??!?!! haha lol
okay, so just to say point blankly this story is awesome lol. Vanessa and Lauren you two are talented writers together and sololy. im so proud of both of you

Vanessa's Chapter(18):
That chapter was freakikng epic. i dont know what you're saying. that was not horrible or average at all. INTENSENESS is how i would describe the chapter. Kellan lashing out on Emma, Kellan lashing out on Selena and Taylor, Taylor talking to Kellan, Selena lashing out on Emma. i cant believe that they both traded each other out. and Kellan beating up Steven, (let me just say that was long deserved) that was awesome. im sad that they broke up though, even though i knew it was going to happen. ):

Lauren's Chapter(19):
okay, so first let me go back to the last few sentences of chapter seventeen. Okay i know that Emma's drunk, but did she really have to that far, i mean thats just not right EVER. now back on nineteen. okay so it was really obvious that they were going to break up and no offense, but i loved taylor lashing out on Logan (even though that should not be offensed in the first place). this just makes me really sad in general, because i mean, i dont even know why. i cant believe that selena left and Emma is doing drugs. shes going to become addicted to all of that.

This is not right, but the story is so awesome. im proud of both of you, even though i already said that. keep up the awesomely amazing work. I seriously cannot wait for the sequel. itll be plenty interesting and i know that you two will have the love put back in there soon. *pauses then glares* you better do that, tehe. well this was just an awesome story. I love both of you. haha (:

Oh as if Taylor and Emma broke up too :(
NOOOO :(
And as if Emma goes off with Logan to do drugs!
Yikes, this story is really taking a turn. In a good way of course :)
Haha can't wait for the sequel! :)

I'm SO glad this is back :D
Chapter 18 was so intense with the fight between well... pretty much all the main characters.
And the fight Kellan and Steven and when Kellan broke up with Selena was so sad :(
Aaaah gonna read next chapter now :)

I absoluetly am addicted to this story! Maybe u guys can write a sequel? Just maybe??