Oh, Brother - Comments

Awwww, now this was cute!!

I really liked this story, especially the ending. I loved when he basically chased her across campus, always chasing after her. And how she switched places with her friend was a much more original plot that I haven't seen used in a story before this.

Ohhhhh. That is such a cute ending. I love it. But I'm so sad that that it's over. This was such a good story. Great job on it(:

No!!! This story was just sooo good! I can't believe it's over!

Grrr...I why did he do that! *grumbling* darn kids, if they like each other, they should be together! You know, forgive and forget?

Update please. ;)

Wow... This story is amazing... I'm quite impressed. :) Keep going with it.

Tyler is an ass. End of discussion.
I geniunely liked him, but just because he's hurt, doesn't mean that he gets permission to walk back into her life to ruin any chance of her being happy again. Even if she was doing it to make him jealous—which she did a very good job of—still doesn't make it right. Even if she was done with Tyler, he had to accept it and move on or grow some fucking balls and do something about it. And by do something about it, I mean be mature too.

Great update. Update soon. (:

Ohhhhhhhh shiiiit.
I take back what I said. Sera was right not to tell him. How the fuck did the real Reece not recognize her brother?! And Sera must be heartbroken. Love comes with heartbreak. If she didn't love him, that wouldn't have hurt so damn bad that she started to cry. I just can't believe that the story's still over. Sera needs to be strong, march right over to him, and plant one right smackaroonie on his lips. Even if he's hurt, he loves her, and that's totally gonna make things better. Sorta.

Update before I throw something.

Sera is a fool. No doubt about it. It doesn't matter how many times she denies that she loves him, she knows it's a lie. Tyler won't hate her, because he kissed his "sister" so that clearly means that her feelings are requitted. True love sees through the lies and the faults of one another, and she just isn't getting that. Right now, I don't think I like Sera much because of it. But I adore Tyler and his unnatural love for his "sister" who ditched at the last minute.

Updates are in order.

Oh jeebs.
I can't wait to see Tyler's reaction when he realizes she's not really his sister. :3
I'll work on my failtastic commenting. But sheriousleh, update a once! Lives depend on it, I swear!
Okay, maybe just mine, but still.
Oi. Tyler is a smart cookie, but how's this all gonna play out?
I'm excited to find out.

Updateeeeee. Soonnnnnn. Pleaseeeeee.

No! Why did she leave!

Awh =[

Fantastic update =]

There really aren't enough comments on this story.
I love it and I'm subscribing.

Tyler...oh lord, what a tough time he's going through with this one. Same with Seraphina. These two are falling too fast to have time to last. Charlene-gagggg. I hate her. Jeremy is a fool for not knowing or recognizing Reece as not being the real one.
The plot of this story is truly ingenious and I must say, I wish I'd come up with it myself because it's just that good. I'm subscribing. The characters are fairly well developed, the plot is exquisite, and the plot thickens. The grammar is pretty good, too.

Update soon. Cx

Keep writing!

I found myself really loving this, and I'm surprised it hasn't had more attention. Great work!

Haha! I love it already!
Definitely an original plot, very unique and I can tell it's going to make me laugh really hard. I liked Tyler immediately. And you're even got good grammar!
Thank goodness. Keep up the good work :3