i love it, and i'd hate to see it not go anywhere. (: the switching perspectives would be nice, as delightful syn said, to give readers an idea of what the other character thinks.
I love it and can't wait to see what you do with it. I think you could maybe go back and forth between POV's, give some insight into what the other is thinking. Please keep it.
the switching perspectives would be nice, as delightful syn said, to give readers an idea of what the other character thinks.