Spectrum Disorder - Comments

plasticpapercut (100)

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this is a really good interesting story and i hope you continue. However I found it difficult to understand sometimes due to the changes in P.O.V, if you should change the P.O.V you should state it i.e 'Gerard's P.O.V'. Also I advise that you find someone to proof read for you becaude this story has the potential to be amazing if someone helped you brush up your grammer/verb tense/vocabulary.

Good luck with writing your next chapter, I look forward to reading more

November 9th, 2010 at 05:50pm

Ktrgrl (100)

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=0 How could you stop there! This story is really good , I can't wait for the next update.

November 8th, 2010 at 09:52pm

shades.of.blue. (100)

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This sounds like an interesting story. :)
I am looking forward to reading more.
<Brittania>

October 12th, 2010 at 04:22am