The Last Place - Comments

I just reread this and fell in love all over again. The proposal was too cute :)

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The first chapter was very heartbreaking, though I was confused as to how Fallon died. I really like your writing, though. I haven't finished yet, but I plan on reading the whole story.

I found the first chapter to be sad, it almost made me cry, I love the layout, especially the picture. I might read more, well I will read more because now I'm interested and to be honest with you at first I didn't think I was going to like this story, but only because it's not usually the kind of story I would read.

Love the story, keep doing what you are doing.

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I second the comment below me. I had no idea was was going on. I even googled the name Fallon O'Brien thinking he was a real snowboarder, instead I just picture of Conan O'Brien and Jimmy Fallen. Then I finally realized this is an original story. Your writing is good, very easy to read which is something I think important for a reader. You describe things really well. Oh, and I love that this takes place in a boarding school.

Comment swap, here! This story is amazing! At the beginning I was slightly confused as to what was happening, but it all came around. Your layout is also really adorable and adds to the story. All around, great job! I really enjoyed it!

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I am truly happy that I read your story. It amazing how perfect you describe her pain. The layout its cute and at the start I was not sure that she will end up with the "bad boy". The story ended good I loved the end a lot.
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I thought this story was absolutely amazing! The first thing I noticed was how adorable the layout was. I guess I just like pink things. And I love cute love stories like this. It had some emotional parts, but in the end it was a real feel-good story :) Very nicely done!

AWWWWWWWW, THE ENDING IS SOOOO CUTE!!!!!!<3
I LOVED IT!!!!!!
You're amazing you know that!!!

I found and finished this story today. I absolutely loved it <3
I've written something with a similar premise: a girl losing her best friend, but I just love the way you've written this. Definitely going to be reading this again ^^

I LOVE THIS! :)

ah! amazing!

this was great! The epilogue was so cute!

YAY!!! They got engaged! How cute. I loved this story. Thank you!

Awwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!! I loved the ending!!!! :) I'm sad that it's over, but I loved reading this :) I seriously enjoyed reading it ;) :D:P :) :D:P :) :D:P

I missed a bity but I'm caught up now ;) Loved the updates :) :D:P

I love it. Brilliant story line and extremely emotional.
I cries like five times. Poor Fallon.
Please update.

I LOVE this :)
update soon please?

Buahahahaa I knew they'd kiss sooner or later. And dangflabbit, Carmen just had to ruin the moment!!!! Lol but I love how dramatic she was in itching her nose :) hahahah Love it :) :D:P

So, I just found this, and I really love it ;) It's really well-written and I love the storyline :) :D:P I can't wait to read more :) :D:P

I really like Shea! He's cute, esp when he's nervous. Thnx for the update!! :-)