February 21st, 2014 at 11:29am
Sadly, I only found out about your story from the comment swap, I've never read an original fiction like this...well anywhere!!! You had me hooked on it from the first sentence!! I love the connection between Blair and Raegan and can't wait for you to update soon!!
The only criticism I have is in the news report bit, the name Chamberlain just appeared a tad too often, but aside from that - NO criticisms I love it!!
Good luck, I hate it when I get writer's block and I hope you update soon!!
Good job on your part and good luck writing! I know this hasn't been updated in well over three years, but do consider writing again for this story, as you've already got a great start right here.