AWE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I READ THE WHOLE THING TODAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT WAS SO GOOD!!!!!!!!! Okay well... When I start reading a good story I can't really... Stop... ^^^That's me complimenting your story!!! Please write more?? Soon??? I'll give you an imaginary cookie!!!!!!!!!!!
FIRST COMMENT! bam. i rule. but yeah. this story is kind of amazing. you should keep going with it! i can't wait to see what happens when she goes with him!