Haunted - Comments

i love ur story keep it up updated soon plz want to know more

So, I really enjoy the way this is all coming together. I want Selena and Kellan back together already. I think that Emma and Taylor should try to be friends, but I could definitely see them back together. I think they work. Ugh! I don't know when this was updated but I'm glad I checked. I hope that — since it's summer — there will be even more [fabulous updates! <3

omgg i lovee this storyy ahhhh vanessa pleeeeeese update soon!! <3

OH MY GOSH IT'S BACK :)
I'm sooo happy right now :)

Good chapter!

DAMN!!!! THAT WAS SOME EPIC SHIZZ RIGHT THERE!!
I cannot believe that that happened and Logan, fuck him.
Cannot wait for more on Lauren and Vanessa's Haunted. (:

OMG I LOVE THIS STORY IT TOOK ME LIKE 2 DAYS TO READ UNTOUCHABLE AND THIS
I SOO LOVE LAUREN PLEASE UPDATE SOON

your so right about joe jonas please update soon

LOL I love your rant at the end. Isn't it true though? Joe is such a douche at the moment. No offenses to y'all who love him. I used to like him and then, well...Demi happened.
I ADORE this story and I love the whole plot. We need to hear from Emma soon! :P

Yay! Joe Jonas is a douche who dates girls that are WAAAYY out of his league! I swear to pizzapie I was the only one who thought that!

I'M SO EXCITED THAT IT'S BACK!!

KL's and AG's conversation was hilarious. I love the things they said to each other XD

:0 OH MY GOSH.
I loved this update :)

Yay, you updated! I was really happy to see that you updated Vanessa, i thought it was an amazing first chapter after the intro's. I loved the flashback at the beginning, it showed Selena still cares deeply about Kellan, and i think it's only a matter of time before Kellan realises he feels the same. The chapter length was perfect and it was good to see Selena and Kellan in the same chapter, i did notice that there is a huge emotional difference between them, it sucks that Selena is in a really depressive and bad place, whereas Kellan seems perfectly fine.
I can't wait for the next update for this story, i really love it so far. <3

So, first off, let me say, oh my good golly gosh you have updated. I am officially the happiest person in the world right now. Seriously, this was one plot opening chapter, which by the way is the best kind of chapter there is. It's really cool how you've added a whole lot of character traits in the story and the length of this is absolutely amazing. One thing I suggest you work on is your repetitiveness with names. I mean, it's good to tell us who's doing what, but when it's obvious on who you are talking about you don't have you use their names so many times, for example: Selena sat in the car. Selena was really upset so she rested her head against the window. Selena turned her head towards Ashley. Most of that could be switched to just she or her well, her wouldn't fit, but you get what I mean? Like you don't have to keep using their names in each paragraph. Other than that, your writing is freakin' awesome, and much longer than in the first story which is cool. It seems that your writing style might have changed, but that might just be the late night comment kickin' in. I can't wait to see what you have in store for this story and honestly I could care less on how you portray Joe Jonas, I'm not a fan, I just think he's super cute -- if he would just trim those bushy eyebrows -- and he reminds me of Gabe Saporta ;)

Wow, that was one heck of a chapter. A therapist? That sucks. And wowzers, Kellan is evil in this. The ending reference to Twilight and James was HILARIOUS!

OH MY GOSH!! this update was amazing, like i really really loved it.
Selena's part of the story was so funny in the beginning, and then it turned a little darker, which is a really surprising thing. i have a weird feeling about that theripist though. she makes me a little angry.
AND Kellan of course being a douche bag, that is not something that i didnt expect. i mean some guys actually have feeling after a break up, they arent robots. OHH, and i feel like Jonas fans have no right to rant and bitch at you because you are just stating your opinions and how you feel.
I LOVED THE UPDATE VANESSA AND I CANT WAIT FOR LAURENS NOW!!

Update soon please!!!!!!!

omg im back and i love it update soon please valerie its ur turn please update!!! need more!!!

Hai :) Just wanted to stop by and say that I've been stalking your summary, looking for a chapter three because the first two chapters were way too good ;)