Do You Hear Me Scream? - Comments

Chapter 23 was intense, I feel so bad for him!
I really can't wait til you update again,
i'll be here....
waiting.
Update SOON please?

I sense a suicide attempted in the near future and if there isnt one i will be sad. and i really hope rider can work things out with dakota cause i really love their relationship and rider really needs to dump those douchebag friends of his

Wow.
I knew this moment was going to happen sooner or later, but damn it makes me wanna cry for him and tell him that he's not sumone who deserves this crap.
Post More SOON!!!!!!!!!
Can't wait to see how stupid Rider fixes this.

I told you this would blow up in your face.
Didn't I tell you??

Omg no. Dakota....ughh rider has some explaining to do.

awwwwwww. How cute. ^_^ Brothers again.

awe i'm so happy the brothers are actually getting along for once!

I love this. (: Update soon, yeah?
<3

extremely intense chapter... wow.

:O Woe! I can't believe he actually remembers and went in there by himself!

whoa.

UPDATE. UPDATE.
UPDATE. UPDATE.
UPDATE. UPDATE.
UPDATE. UPDATE.
UPDATE. UPDATE.

no pressure, nice chapter (:

Just found this story a few hours ago, and I've read all of the way through, and I sincerely love it (: People with a stutter literally break my heart; like, I have no words to describe it. They're precious and adorable, and I just want to hug them all the time.
And this story is just, gah. Precious c:
i really really really want Rider to break off the bet with his friends without Dakota knowing.
But, hey, we all know that wouldn't make for a good story. <3
update again soon, please <3

This is so well written it almost phicically pains me!
I don't understand why but it does.
I love that Dakota finally found out what happened.
Really. I am.
And I wish that he didn't think that Rider thought he was a freak because, clearly, that isn't true.
Now that he knows the devil that has been living in his conscience maybe he can start to get help?
I dunno. Thats what I think. Maybe all this will make Rider realize that this is more important than his stupid reputation...

Oh poop.. Can't wait to see what happens.. Update soon, yeah?
<3

He better lose the fucking bet... or even better forget all about it.

I'm just getting around to reading this and I really wish I had found it sooner! This is so amazing, I swear. The plot goes at a steady pace and a very good one at that. The characters are developed in a way that made me feel so attached. Dakota is as sweet as can be and Rider....well, he's getting there.

Something very very horrible is going to happen and it's going to be pertaining to the net. Not that you needed to know because I'm sure you already do but it's going to blow up in Riders face and hurt Dakota really bad. It makes me sad just to think about it but I guess I have to live in the story as it goes.

I hope that Dakota figures out whatever it is that's bothering him because he doesn't deserve all this and maybe if he found out he could start to overcome it. Also, I hope that Rider figures out what he feels for Dakota because I think it'll make him feel a lot better and maybe even give him the courage to maybe stand up to Chris.

Overall, I'm almost literally in love with this story.
Please update soon.

i love rider so much... i mean he is the typical bad boy falling for the innocence in front of him :D poor little dakota i feel so bad for him..... point blank i love this story XD

He has to choose Dakota!!!

D: le gasp! what is he gonna choose to do?

Absolutely wonderful (: Update soon, yeah?
<3