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  • VengeanceIsMine

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    loved this XD
    October 19th, 2011 at 03:44am
  • Kricket

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    i really really really loved this story!! u r a great writer... too bad she got pregnant at the end tho bcuz i was gunna suggest makin a sequel where they adopt a kid and experience being parents... i think it couldve been interesting... but its okk i like the end that u wrote it was cute
    April 12th, 2011 at 01:36am
  • bloodravyn

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    loved!
    March 30th, 2011 at 09:45am
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    Awww!!
    I loved this story!!
    March 30th, 2011 at 01:55am
  • WOAHdreambig

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    A perfect ending! I really enjoyed this story, and look forward to reading your new one.
    March 28th, 2011 at 02:56pm
  • foREVer_love

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    I'm so sad this story is over! :( But it was amazing!
    March 28th, 2011 at 02:52pm
  • Issues

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    This story was really cute! I'm a little sad that it's over.
    But I'm exited to read your new story. :)
    March 28th, 2011 at 12:39pm
  • Mrs Synyster Gates

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    so good so sweet. I wish life could be like your stories.
    March 28th, 2011 at 04:35am
  • autumnfreakshow

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    Awww yay I am so happy that she got her whish granted (;

    This was a fantastic story and I am so glad that you shared it with us :D As always you are a fantastic writer, who does give to many teasers...grr...but nonetheless always make us coming back for more!

    -your humble readers
    autumnfreakshow XD
    March 28th, 2011 at 03:52am
  • hotfish13

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    Omg!! Such a cute ending!!
    March 28th, 2011 at 03:32am
  • a venom

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    loved how you ended this one
    March 28th, 2011 at 02:47am
  • TwistedScars

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    I am so very sad to see this story end, but am happy that it ended the way it did. It was an amazing read, can't wait to read your next one!!
    March 28th, 2011 at 12:52am
  • Psycho Lunatic

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    Awww I'm sad to see the end but that was perfect. I loved every moment of this In Love
    March 28th, 2011 at 12:36am
  • starbella

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    i honestly think that you ended pefectly, not dragged on and fit the story perfectly.
    I think if you ever got motivated you could make a sequel with their kid a teenager or something :)
    March 28th, 2011 at 12:15am
  • cruciatus.

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    Batman!

    That was adorable. I loved the way you had this chapter with the dress and everything, and how Layla was so doubtful that she was pregnant right up until the end. I also love how serious Zacky was about wanting a family with her. This has to be one of your best works ever. It was such a unique, original concept, and I've never seen anything like it. I love how you put such a tragic twist on things in the beginning, and then made a lovely, beautiful romance bloom from all that. It shows that true love can happen in the darkest of times, and I loved that. :3
    March 27th, 2011 at 11:03pm
  • Its_RobynXo

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    Aw cute ending, loved it! <3
    March 27th, 2011 at 10:51pm
  • catbat

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    I am such a sucker for a happy ending, thank you so much for writing it!!!!!
    March 27th, 2011 at 09:43pm
  • Kak0o8

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    I absolutely love this story; even though, I know how hard it is on this beautiful girl. She deserves something more. She deserves to have this guy, to marry him, and to get pregnant with him. It's amazing. It sort of makes me cry. I bet her father and little brother are smiling and watching over her.
    March 27th, 2011 at 08:56pm
  • viciousfeeling

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    I am so jealous of them it is my dream to get married on Halloween - it is definitely my favorite holiday
    such a great ending
    March 27th, 2011 at 08:00pm
  • CrouchingTurte

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    I'm all giddy..! x3
    I loved it. =3
    March 27th, 2011 at 07:37pm