i really really really loved this story!! u r a great writer... too bad she got pregnant at the end tho bcuz i was gunna suggest makin a sequel where they adopt a kid and experience being parents... i think it couldve been interesting... but its okk i like the end that u wrote it was cute
Awww yay I am so happy that she got her whish granted (;
This was a fantastic story and I am so glad that you shared it with us :D As always you are a fantastic writer, who does give to many teasers...grr...but nonetheless always make us coming back for more!
i honestly think that you ended pefectly, not dragged on and fit the story perfectly. I think if you ever got motivated you could make a sequel with their kid a teenager or something :)
That was adorable. I loved the way you had this chapter with the dress and everything, and how Layla was so doubtful that she was pregnant right up until the end. I also love how serious Zacky was about wanting a family with her. This has to be one of your best works ever. It was such a unique, original concept, and I've never seen anything like it. I love how you put such a tragic twist on things in the beginning, and then made a lovely, beautiful romance bloom from all that. It shows that true love can happen in the darkest of times, and I loved that. :3
I absolutely love this story; even though, I know how hard it is on this beautiful girl. She deserves something more. She deserves to have this guy, to marry him, and to get pregnant with him. It's amazing. It sort of makes me cry. I bet her father and little brother are smiling and watching over her.