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  • Saya

    Saya (150)

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    You lied to me! This is most definably not a 'piece of crap'!

    Your story here is adorable! <3 As flyer. said, you made it perfect. You didn't cross the cliche line, and that's a big win for you. I really think you have a knack for writing, love!

    But the layout sort of made the amazing story a downer. Something this awesome deserves an awesome layout to go with it. =D

    Good job, altogether, though! <3
    June 2nd, 2011 at 08:41pm
  • flyer.

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    Awww, this was cute! Your description is nice, and the plot is...fairytale like without going overboard into cliche land.
    Nice job!
    The layout fits well for it too, it's very...dreamy/mystical-ey.
    October 17th, 2010 at 10:30pm
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