Please update soon! You left it at such a cliff hanger! That is so not nice. And your story is really good! I just wanna keep reading it, so more updates would be fantastic =]
Her smile came back much like his. “Because when it’s bright outside you can’t see the light from inside the house.” --Best Line ever. Haha. I'll have to remember this if I ever get into a conversation with an atheist. I love this though.
I didn't even know you had this going on. I just stumbled across it today. I have no idea who the people are, or are supposed to be so I am throughly enjoying this. It's like just reading a book and having no preconceived notions of how the characters are supposed to act. Wonderful!!