Finally someone that know how to write! I think this is very good, the chapters arn't too long, and you write in a way that makes me wanting to read more, and don't make me fall asleep halfway through the story. I'm Subscribing to this : ]
Why thank you =D I've got a couple more updates written but I'm trying to give myself time to write more so they won't be out for a couple days or so. But thanks for the comment ^-^