Imagine - Comments

It really was more like a poem then anything. I liked this, a lot. Makes you think, y'know?
Lovely. :}

I agree with featherless biped.
It does need a special layout (:

The sentance structure is like a lullaby.
It makes the reader want to stick around for the end of the story.
It's a beautiful portrayal of, well, thanksgiving. Haha.

Oh, and Mob Swap.

This is really a poem if anything.
It's so smooth and charismatic in its' own special way.
Because it's a drabble though, it needs a special layout, can I make one?

This is really lovely, but I agree with Miss.Darling about the layout. Maybe it's just me, but it felt a bit out of place. Anyways, it's sweet and simple and I really enjoyed it. I'm not Christian, but there was this one song that always played on the TV that went I can only imagine... or something like that. This song reminded me of it a bit, hah!
Lovely job (: <3

Well I just loved this, although I agree,the layout was off. I think it was just the green background, it felt out of place. But really sweet and simple and so true...everyone should listen and learn from that. Nice job :) Once again, your writing intriuges me!

I like how it is in a poem format but it's still a story. It has that magical, quaint charm to it that, when I find in stories, I adore<3

I like this. I only don't like the layout. It felt like more of a poem than an actual dribble to me though. Although the purpose of it was exquisite. Very nicely done. :)

Aw, this was lovely.
It was short, but explained everything it needed. I agree with radiant. about the layout, though.
Only thing I noticed:
"Now imagine if you were blind
And you could never see them."
Since you made a new line, and there's an 'and' there, should their be a comma?
Like:
"Now imagine if you were blind,
And you could never see them."
Small little thing, but I used to use commas like crazy, so now I'm real aware of them :)
I absolutely loved the idea, and how it reflected in the end.
Lovely job :)

Whoa. This was really poetic and beautiful. The layout is a bit -- choppy though. :\ Other than that, I loved this. <3

This is so lovely for such a short amount of words. Well done. <3