The Greatest Hunt. - Comments

Sheepy (115)

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Heehee. It's almost like a quest. Yay!
It's good that you've added in a person who doesn't only see Cain as the monster he is becoming, but still as the brother. Where that will lead her as a result, only updates could tell. Hint :XD

January 9th, 2008 at 10:54pm

Sheepy (115)

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And so the secret comes out.
Your description is scary, at points, which is a wonderful thing, because it lets you feel the emotion of the story.
What will happen to Cain, I wonder...
I'm curious as to what the aftermath will be. Very much so.

January 9th, 2008 at 12:14am

DrinkingxHypocrisy (100)

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Loving the story man ! >_>
Keep it uppp.
Can't wait to see what happens

January 8th, 2008 at 08:16am

superfreak01 (100)

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I only had enough time to read half-way thorugh the first one and im already hooked. Can't wait to finish it. Keep up the good work! ~Chelsea

January 8th, 2008 at 02:21am

Sheepy (115)

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Hey, welcome to mibba.
I really enjoyed reading this. It's not often that you find a well-written werewolf story on here.
The first chapter was chillingly described. It really highlighted for me why they call it a curse, being able to almost feel the physical torture they have to go through to simply transform.
It will be interesting to see how much Cain can hide his own secret from the others, when he himself is glorified as a hero for ridding them of the curse, when he in fact has not really done any such thing.
I'm interested. Very interested.
If there's more coming, I'd love to read it.

January 8th, 2008 at 12:19am