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  • Make the Voices Stop

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    my cousin goes to Rogers in Toledo, Ohio... no joke haha I'm kinda freaked out now lol, but I love the story :)
    October 11th, 2012 at 11:58pm
  • Vampirelover31

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    r u interested in doing a novel with me
    November 9th, 2011 at 06:54pm
  • hangsang.

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    Love it!! Can't wait to move on to the sequal :)
    Your writing is amazing
    July 19th, 2011 at 03:37pm
  • hersheyrockett

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    Lol me and andrew have the same birthday
    July 11th, 2011 at 07:27am
  • Jackjohnson96

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    Haha, in chapter 24 you used the word niggling. I assume it's a type, but it's also kinda an awesome word. Just letting u know, I'm impressed .
    July 9th, 2011 at 02:41pm
  • CarryOnWanderer

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    haha page 27 claim ;)
    May 18th, 2011 at 02:04am
  • CarryOnWanderer

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    dang I stumbled across the sequel to this story and decided to read this before reading the sequel

    Me: woo I'm so smart!
    Conscience: No you're not.
    Me: T.T boo you
    Conscience: boo freaking you.

    anyway, back to your story, I'm going to read more and then do the sequel so I'll comment more for sure
    May 18th, 2011 at 02:04am
  • Amyartkittentm

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    Chapter 21 made me want to cry!!!
    May 8th, 2011 at 01:19am
  • Amyartkittentm

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    Chapter 17
    OMG
    he finally popped the question!!!
    'Be my boyfriend'
    May 7th, 2011 at 11:44pm
  • Amyartkittentm

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    OMG
    Chapter 11 was so hot!!!
    May 7th, 2011 at 07:40pm
  • Amyartkittentm

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    Chapter 6
    OMG
    His mom is a big dush!!!!
    I love the twins, they are so sweet
    May 7th, 2011 at 06:45pm
  • Amyartkittentm

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    Chapter 4
    Ouch!!!!!
    you broke his nose!!!!!
    ouch
    May 7th, 2011 at 06:22pm
  • Amyartkittentm

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    Chapter2
    Really?! 76 subscribers in only 2 chapters!?!?!?!?!
    You gotta teach me!!!
    May 7th, 2011 at 05:41pm
  • Amyartkittentm

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    Chapter 1 was awesome
    You made the intro sound interesting too, im looking forward to reading the whole storie
    May 7th, 2011 at 05:31pm
  • Hiyoubyeyou

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    That was a beautiful story. Thanks for writing it I can't wait to read JUST COME RUNNING
    April 27th, 2011 at 06:20am
  • Hiyoubyeyou

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    I have never cried so much over a story. You are an amazing writer.
    I wouldn't be surprised if you make this in a book. It really really really *one million reallys later* really good =D
    April 27th, 2011 at 06:17am
  • Serena.

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    Ugh, I don't even have words.
    This story was so beautiful. <3
    I can't wait for the epilogue!
    April 18th, 2011 at 04:21am
  • lizziemcgenius

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    kept my promise :)
    HOORAY TYLER SAVED THE DAY AGAIN
    am i the only one who pictured the blonde guy being Draco Malfoy? especially when it said he drawled something? i am? oh, well.

    YAY EVERYONE IS REUNITED AND HAPPY!

    great ending to a great story. i can't wait for the sequel! :D
    April 16th, 2011 at 04:57am
  • lizziemcgenius

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    of course, the second i open the link, my mom tells me to get off the computer.
    fuck my life.
    i promise to read it later and i will go subscribe to the sequel right now!
    April 13th, 2011 at 04:05am
  • rawrritsjess

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    Gahhhhh great ending!!!
    FUCK YES SEQUEL!!
    April 13th, 2011 at 02:41am
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