November 16th, 2010 at 10:23pm
Cancer Kids - Comments
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I really like how you ended this chapter; I'm quite curious as to what Gerard's reaction will be. I really like this story but if you aren't feeling it anymore, don't force yourself to write it. (:November 16th, 2010 at 10:21pm
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Aww, Gerard. Sucks when you feel like that, huh?
Well, we can see that Frank is there for him. Which is good. xD
I love this!November 16th, 2010 at 09:06pm -
Well I still love this :D <3November 16th, 2010 at 07:52pm
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I really like this story! Please don't stop!
I'm looking forward to the next chapter, what will happen at frank's? ^^November 16th, 2010 at 07:25pm -
Aww! It is nice that Gerard is smiling. I hate the horrible way he lives. Terribly sad and wasteful - and he must smell terrible!!!November 14th, 2010 at 06:45am
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awesome cant wait for another chapter
DUNDUNDUN wat will happenNovember 13th, 2010 at 10:08pm -
awesome cant wait for another chapter
DUNDUNDUN wat will happenNovember 13th, 2010 at 10:08pm -
Oh Gerard.......
At least he knows it's a pathetic lifestyle.
I'm glad he smiled when he saw Frank, at least he's got something to smile about, ya know.
I love this!November 13th, 2010 at 06:09pm -
I really like this story :) It's so sad but so sweet at the same time :) Please carry on! ♥ :))))) xxNovember 13th, 2010 at 04:49pm
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I fucking love this story! :DNovember 12th, 2010 at 04:59pm
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I wish Frank was going to be at the party too! Cannot wait for their next meeting.November 8th, 2010 at 07:45pm
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I really liked the chapter =] Just one thing: is it just me, or did you called Gee's friend first Brian and then Rick? "He had gone home, and I had wondered off to find Brian."
"I had been round Rick’s house enough times"
Or is it another person? ><
More soon?November 7th, 2010 at 10:10pm -
Gerard's POV was good, it helped us see what he was thinking. His life does suck, but it's not as bad as some other people's life, and it seems like he knows that too.
Nothing wrong with a joint or so. The clothes thing, who cares?
He just kinda needs a friend, like Frank, right now.
Love this!November 7th, 2010 at 04:31pm -
ya know, Gerard's life really sucks. i hope he can get his act together and stop fucking like everything that moves.November 7th, 2010 at 04:18pm
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To be honest, this was actually my favorite chapter. It gave us a very good insight into Gerard's character and, although he seems kind of scuzzy, I like him. There were some parts that sounded a little wonky because I think there were some tense mixups but nonetheless, I really liked this chapter a lot. :DNovember 7th, 2010 at 03:58pm
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Ahh I love it! <3
Poor kids though :(
THEY HAVE TO FALL IN LOVE -cough- s'cuse me.
:) xNovember 4th, 2010 at 07:14pm -
So sad, but I am glad they are at least spending time together so they will not feel so alone.November 3rd, 2010 at 03:48am
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oh! this is just the cutest lil story ever,
and it seems realistic, in a way seeing as they are leaning on eachother for comfort,
anyways! i loved this. great update!November 2nd, 2010 at 11:09pm -
I like this! =D Keep going! =]November 2nd, 2010 at 11:05pm
I'm subscribing :)
More soon please <3