Eternal Forever - Comments

ladywolf89 (100)

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I really do miss this story and wonder how it will end.

January 29th, 2013 at 09:35am

jane1280 (100)

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lol I love the words you use. For ex: 'searing kiss.'
Dude haha I thought I had skipped a chapter because they go fro the photo shoot to being attacked... Who attacked them? OMG but I'm happy cause it seems like they are finally going to be together :D <3 <3 <3

May 22nd, 2011 at 06:56am

Amyartkittentm (100)

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i'm on chapta 7
i'd freak if i'd cry tears of blood...still cool though
yay, you made him shout yukis name
romantic

May 1st, 2011 at 04:21am

Amyartkittentm (100)

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Gackt is his father!

April 29th, 2011 at 06:56am

Amyartkittentm (100)

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Chapter 5
OMG
He is gonna suck Frederick dry!!!

April 29th, 2011 at 06:50am

Amyartkittentm (100)

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Chapter
you made Frederick do what?!

April 29th, 2011 at 06:41am

Amyartkittentm (100)

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Chapter 3
Was that Yukis first kiss????
LOL

April 29th, 2011 at 06:34am

Amyartkittentm (100)

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im on Chapter 2

AWWWWW
why'd you kill his grandfather?!

April 29th, 2011 at 06:23am

Amyartkittentm (100)

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First i wanna start off by sayin Frederick is supper HOT!
And Yuki looks like an adorable lost puppy!!!!
I read the description an as soon as i read that your a lunnetic for yaoi, i was hooked!!!!!!!
I almost cried when Yuki found out that he had family
cant wait to read the rest.

April 29th, 2011 at 06:11am

jane1280 (100)

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Sumimasen. for late late late comment.
Yuki is funny. When you were describing
the part in the beginning, when he was
getting ready to go to the meeting, I pictured
him like gackt XD but then gackt walked
by and my imagination went away.

February 13th, 2011 at 05:08pm

jane1280 (100)

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Awwww how sad it would have been cool if fred would have been there in the mrning and they had a happy ending. LOL But how cute Yuki fell in love and he didn't ever realize it.

January 28th, 2011 at 06:04pm

jane1280 (100)

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You writing style is improving a lot.
Added great detail and emotion to this chapter ^^

January 26th, 2011 at 11:24pm

jane1280 (100)

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Oh I liked it except i forgot to add something.
If you can, although i can already tell,can
indicate where jason's point of view ends
and where fred's starts. ^.^

January 19th, 2011 at 05:20pm