I realy like the layout a ot, but the contrast of the lightish blue and the white makes it difficult to read.
I like how you explain things, the anologys make it seem more realistic. Oh she has a baby I'm guessing? And she really likes the feeling of it moving? She really mustve liked this guy, because she is explaining him wth so much detail. She commited suicide? Beacuse of a boy,, that's kind of sad :(.
But this is really good! A sad concept, but very well written!
*sobbing in the background* [no seriously you had me in tears for real] i loved this story. it fits my mood perfectly. you should write a lot more stories.
I like how you explain things, the anologys make it seem more realistic. Oh she has a baby I'm guessing? And she really likes the feeling of it moving? She really mustve liked this guy, because she is explaining him wth so much detail. She commited suicide? Beacuse of a boy,, that's kind of sad :(.
But this is really good! A sad concept, but very well written!