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  • The Rev.

    The Rev. (250)

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    I've never been a huge fan of the Jonas Brothers, but I did have a poster back in the day and even though I haven't listened to it in years, I can sing Burning Up. Joe was always my favorite though, with Nick being my second favorite.

    ANYWAYS!

    This is a very cool / original idea. I have no idea if it was a song-fic or what, but I liked it. The flash backs throughout the story were lovely. It was better than having them joined together at the beginning. That would be boring.

    The layout was cute ;D Hehe and you had no grammar errors. Good job :D
    December 21st, 2010 at 09:58pm
  • desiher

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    This is... one of the very few fanfictions I actually like. As in... before now, I'd only ever found one fan fiction I liked. So...Yeah. [x
    You should feel proud of it. (:
    October 20th, 2010 at 02:24am
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