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  • xXToLiveMyLifeXx

    xXToLiveMyLifeXx (100)

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    Its a good story. A lot of spelling, grammer, ad punctuation errors. But otherwise its great.
    January 15th, 2011 at 07:03pm
  • requiem.

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    I think this could turn out to be a really great story with a few changes like proper grammer & punctuation and stuff.
    December 29th, 2010 at 03:23am
  • abc500

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    I like it so far:)
    Update<3
    October 20th, 2010 at 11:53pm
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