October 18th, 2010 at 08:03am
Unveiling The Unexpected - Comments
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This is so good and unique.! While it's still about zack and a girl, she quite different considering her height, probably mental capacity and vocabulary and of course her age lolOctober 17th, 2010 at 06:43pm
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I was excited when the new chapter came up! Remy is so cute, I was laughing at the fact when Remy was listing the things she did and Zack corrected her she just kept going on the list like she didn't care that she called it hide seek. It was adorable (:October 17th, 2010 at 06:40pm
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Remy is so cute! This whole story is so cute!
Update soon, please!October 17th, 2010 at 06:12pm -
Okay so Kelsey is heartless, I don't understand how she just turned Zack down like she did. secondly i absolutely adore this story!I love when Zack first meets Remy, and Remy reminded
me of myself as a kid cause I was one that said a few words then I turned into a chatterbox but anyway it was so sad and cute when Remy didn't want Zack to leave. :) I really like this, totally subscribing (:October 17th, 2010 at 01:40pm -
Aww...that was so adorable! I have a feeling that Zack might adopt Remy.
Update soon!October 17th, 2010 at 08:57am -
Zack is such a sweetheart, oh my gosh. I'm seriously in love with him. Kelsey didn't deserve him anyway, the heartless thing.
This story seems like it has really great potential, I'm really excited for it.October 17th, 2010 at 05:25am -
Aw Zack and Remy were so cute!
I'm predicting a bond between the two possibly?
Love it :DOctober 17th, 2010 at 05:16am -
One chapter and you've got me enthralled.:)
So far Kelsey seems kind of cold and cruel, but I can't completely say that because I don't know the past of hers and Zack's relationship.
I'm excited and currious to see where this is goingOctober 17th, 2010 at 03:05am
I'm wondering if Remy cried out on the swings because he said she was his and the girl called her his daughter.
I';m still not completely sure why he said that.
This being said, once again I'm anxious for a new update :)