The Alpha is not my Mate, The Alpha is not my Mate, Oh, God. The Alpha's My Mate. - Comments

yea an update!!!!!!! i love this story! please keep writing!!

love the update :D

Isn't he? (: Will do!
Thanks for the comment ;D

Xavier's an ass monkey! update soon(:

Why, thank-you!
It's glad to here some feedback :D
Now, I have a questions for you:
Is there anything I can work on to improve my writing?

I really loved your last chapter. Chap 12. Fantastic is all I can say! and I love you story more and more each post! Pwease keep it up
~luv~

Lol, glad you like it!
I'll be updating soon so stay tuned (:

OMG!!!!!!! I LLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!! =D PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!
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Thanks (: Glad you enjoyed it.

love the update :D

SilversXheart: Thanks soooo much! I will definitley change the background! Just for you (:
gambitess95: Thanks for the comment but as I wrote in the first couple of chapters she didn't love him off the bat. She also told Xavier that she has to take time to love him.

hey i love your story just it is a little hard to read with the font color being black, but otherwise it is really good and cant wait for the next update

Erm
I like the idea of this story but it cnt be a love story because they have only known each other for like a day and they are in lve?
Her feelings for him are coming too quick
They need to fall in love over a couple of chapters
Not in one, but I like it

love the update :D

Thanks (:

I like your story and the "ignite my flames" title one. I like the other ones first sentence, but you should replace "may I" with something else...it sounds rather odd?
~luv~
love your writning

Thanks! (:
Will do.

update soon i love it(:

Thanks for the comment (: I'll keep you in mind!

'Your my fire. Ignite my flames.'
for sure! to me it sounds sooo much better than 'Your lips look so lonley. May I comfort them?'
The 'YLLSL, MICT?' just sounds cliche, but 'Your my fire. Ignite my flames.' sounds much more original I think. Anyway cant wait to see how Chelsea heals and what happens!
<3:)