Delilah on the Chopping Block - Comments

This was.... thought-provoking, to say the least. At first, I didn't get what was going on in the story, but after it sunk in, I realized that this was about death. I love how you represented death as this fragile, harmless girl that ages everything with a simple touch, and I love how the one character that loves Delilah (not sure if it's a guy or a girl) is willing to do anything to save her, but they don't really know what they're getting themselves into by saying that.

Again, I loved the layout. It was easy to read and still related to the story. The only thing that I really would like to know about this story is if the person that loves Delilah so much is a guy or a girl. Other than that, I loved this.

Epic.

I would add a bit more description near the end. I was confused for a bit, and then I was like ...wow.

This is awesome.