Everything in Between - Comments

I don't like the GF. i like your story so far. I can't wait to see what happens when she goes to paris.

plkaf

I'm gonna SMACK Dominic and I hate Stephanie. Ember better get her ass back soon!!!

love the update :D

<3 Todd
=D
I hate Dominic. ._. He's not being a dad! Well, I'm happy she was happy with her birthday present ^^

love the update :D

Gahh update soon it's getting good

I like Todd, he seems pretty badass.

Great updates..I can't wait to read some more soon

love the update :D

^Nana! =D

Gahaha.
Anyway,
liked the chapter. Update soon, yeah?

This is getting interesting I wanna see this Todd guy xD

love the starting, but i have no idea what the french bits were,
if its not too much to ask could you put the translation in brackets or something? for us non speaking french people?

I'm glad I know French. Haha. Otherwise I would have no idea what they just said right there.
But now I do [:

It's sad to see that Ember left her family alone. It's even more sad that their father is never home either.
I mean, he's supposed to give them a happy life, still. But no, he just doesn't care and leave them alone, too.

Gah, lots of drama.
Update!

Who is this Elizabeth Holly (was it?)

Liking the begining of this story!!! If there is going to be more French anychance in parenthases or something you could put what they say in english? Really like the story plot cant wait till the next update!!!

COMMENT VIRGINITY IS MINESS!...Anyways what you have in store for us this time?? x]]