...He Said, and Pulled the Trigger - Comments

Okay. This is amazing. Just simply amazing. The way you wrote it is gorgeous. I mean, the story is so packed with words and emotions that it all overflows, sometimes making the reader (which is me) feel like I'm the one under his grip, I'm the one he's staring down at. There isn't anything that describes what Gerard's eyes must have looked like but I can imagine.

Just- wow. I stand- no, correction, I sit- in awe. I mean, the way everything is just described is just mind-blowing.

The second chapter turned in a different direction then where I thought it would go. I thought, oh, you know, maybe it'll end with smut and forgiveness but damn. He got shot. In the head! Who thought of that coming up?

This story is just a bullet. I know, I took that from the story itself. But it really is. It's just launched right into your... I don't know, head? Heart? Which ever one it is, this really hits a home run.

Amazing. Simply amazing. It's so utterly ruining and frightening and... just an emotional roller coaster it's addicting.

Awesome writing. I just adore your writing style- it's just so whimsical and realistic.

I love you for this, you know.

Fuck. :cheese:

You're not getting anything more from me.
I'm incapable of that. Just FUCK.

I agree with the person above me.
This is absolutely amazing.
The whole time I was reading this I was wondering how cool this would look if it was like a mini movie.
It sucks that Frank shot Gerard.
Either way, this is really good.
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addicted.
completely and utterly.
i think i'll be making regular and constant returns to this story to re-read it over and over again

*sigh*
It's me...again :D

Just trailing through your list and found this, i remember reading this months ago actually- i believe it was one of the first stories i read of yours and really opened my eyes to a complete different style of writing (so raw, powerful and depraved-in a good way of course)
I'm upset that i didn't comment, a hundred apologies as the story more than merits it. I re-read it all and yes, it made me cry which i'm not embarrassed to admit.

Please put a restraining order on me :D

I'm gonna admit that I have tears. In my eyes.
That's it. You know the rest.
I love you.

I love you guys.
Thanks sooo much! :]]
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h-HOLY SHIT! i gotta tell u- u r an AMAZING writer. u must become one when u grow up. your stories are amazing, and your vocabulary. u must write more...and take something up in writing. your amazing! a professional! WOW.

Wow, that was... amazing.
I love the wording you've used.

Awwh;; thank you!
You guys rock. :]]
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I'm speechless...and amazed. That was beautiful. The imagery was stunning.

u gotta write MORE of these things

WHOA.....
holly hell that was amazing