Sinner. - Comments

I don't even follow this band but this drabble was beautifully written. You don't even really need to know the band and follow it to fall in love with the drabble. This was just stunning, you're a good writer.

I like the wording you used for this, and yeah, I agree it was pretty random, but in a good way. You didn't tell too much detail and say more info about what was going on; you let the reader think for themselves. I don't quite like the layout since, in my opinion, everything was a little too big -- the title, the story content border. It would've been better if the border wasn't so thick. I liked the picture you used, though. Overall, I thought it was great. :D

Mmm...short, sweet, and good writing xD
I like how this was just a single moment, but you managed to embed a lot of meaning in it.
Good job!

That picture... :D Bahaha. But anyways. I like how random and short it was. Ha.