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  • Rath

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    I like the story line. if you need any help, just ask me and I will gladly help you.
    :D
    March 2nd, 2011 at 05:29am
  • Rath

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    it's okay.
    :D
    March 2nd, 2011 at 05:28am
  • MamaZ

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    hun this is an okay story so far, but you really need to step it up with your grammar, i mean i know mine isn't the best, but you really need to work on yours. I know you like to write, but if you're going to post on here try to use punctuation.
    October 19th, 2010 at 10:22pm
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