well after about forever and a day of forgetting to read... i finally remembered and finished the story... :D well, I kinda sourda LOVED this... a lot. it was a really really good story:D and after i make pie, im soo going to read your other stories! loved this :D
Freakin' amazing!!! In my mind Lindsey was (and I don't know why) Taylor Momsen (I think that's how you write her name) except for the bad things... Cuz I don't know if she does that kind of stuff
wow, i loved this. but i love everything you write. and i know that this next story is going to even better than the last two, because, you know, that's just what you do. (:
LMFAO. I was eating a pickle while I was reading (Chapter 18), and when I got to the ending when she sent him that lovely image, I choked on my pickle. No lie.
Ahhhhh I have no idea when you should end it, it depends on what you want to do with it. Go with whatever you think is best. Awesome chapter, by the way. Loved it xD
You know, I never thought of that before, but it just makes me wonder why he needed another chance to live. Anyways, I loved the update. [: I think chapter 20 sounds about right just as long as nothing bad happens haha.
brian seems like a creepy perv.....0.o......just kiddin! haha i love him,hes so- i honestly dont know what to call him- sometimes, can't wait for more! lmao