Thrill of the Fall - Comments

I had a strong feeling it was John sending her the letters.

Astin offered her hand, which was trembling terribly, for him to shake. When he took it, his trembling equally as bad, it was impossible to ignore the jolts of electricity that ran through her body. But they didn’t last long, for she heard a voice in the background that was determined to ruin the moment. She knew who it belonged to, and she knew what it was doing.
I feel bad for her.

I love this story and I think you deserve more comments :)

I'm intrigued. Like, confused, but intrigued. Keep up the writing. People will comment more. At least I hope they do! =)

Hey! I can't believe this story doesn't have more comments, its awesome so far!
I feel so sorry for her, just because of what she has to go through.... At least she has Alex, Evie and 'mystery guy'.
Can't wait for more
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