oh my gosh... and i thought violet was good... i'm not sure how many people have read this but this is something that shouldn't be contained simply to mibba. that was amazing and powerful. i can DEFINITELY see that getting published. just... WOW!
I love your writing technique. I have issues with writing in first person point of view but you pull it off like "WOW" (: Second, OH MY FRICKEN GOSH. This was amazing. The plot. The characters. I loved it. I've always been a fan of old couples in love (my paternal and maternal grandparents being examples) but this was too damn cute to resist.
So I have to ask, is this a true story? It doesn't matter if it is or not dude, its amazing. Like... Wow... I'm seriously speechless. That is one of the most beautiful things I've ever read, and I mean that.,, Wow! Damn you're good!
Mira pendeja!! Como te atreves hacerme llorar. te voy a freakin' arrancar el corazon!!!!!
Thank you. creo que entiendo muchas cosas ahora. y lo siento. por hacerte sentir asi. nunca quize hacerte sentir sola y horrible. pero, con todo mi corazon.
wow. thats all i can really say about this. I have never read such a...powerfull...I dont even know what to call this. Its much more than a story. It's more than a simple thing. Its much much more. I suggest you try to get this published in something. Im not sure what but this belogs in the literature books.
October 21st, 2010 at 07:03pm
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