I'm Partial to Your Lips - Comments

Aw that was so cute! Very intetesting pairing, I like it!

Awww, that was so great and you got those prompts in really well! I've read stories before where they seem forced because the author was trying to hard to stick to criteria but yours flowed so well! They really do seem like the perfect balance!

Great writing!
Jen xx

That was great. They make a cute couple.

This was so cute :D I love Zack/Kyle pairings -- there are way too few in the world.

D'awhhhhhhhh ^_^
-squees-
That was so ridiculously cute,
it's not even funny<3333

Stuffs I want to point out.
(Dun't worry. S'not bad or anything. :]
It's good stuff that I liked.)

My blonde boyfriend just grinned and leapt at me. I caught him effortlessly, allowing him to wrap his legs around my waist and his arms round my neck, despite that fact he’s the same height as me.
Me? I can see that. c:

"...save my door from being violated,"
Lol Zack. xD Only you would say something like that. <3

-giggles-
I just used a blanket fort in one of my stories,
and I love how someone else finally thought of it. My friend and I used to make one when we were little. ^_^

“The one thing that’s important about camping and I forgot it! Freaking bug spray!” Kyle whined.
LOL KYLE. xD

Awh come on dude.
They were just getting into it,
and then and then...
YOU CUT IT OFF. D:<
-rawr-
xD

Mmkayyy.
I love how you incorporated everything into this.
The key (moving in), the blankets (I thought you'd make something cuddly. c:), and then then bug spray (<--- totally awesome. XD).
I figured it would go with camping, and it was so adorable,
I was practically squealing every five friggin seconds. x3
<33333

Oh,
one last thing.
The picture.
*w*
Can't forget that. (;
<3333

Ahmazing jobbbb,
and good luck! :D
<3