:O SHE PUSHED HER! Bitch! I agree with the comments above, i'm really glad you're showing Bella's true colours but not somehow subtler since she's nice some of the time and then others... she's pushing her sister off a cliff :L She sucks as a sister xD I cried my eyes out this summer when i accidentally poked my sister in her eye- i thought i'd blinded her >.<
I love that you haven't made him completely in love with her to start with (now he's imprinted). I like a bit of angst and conflict :D I also like her attitude about him being a jerk... calling him just a stupid boy was amusing xD I agree with babygirl1312 that Embry would be my first choice for best friend, too :) Love the story as always, keep it coming, you're doing great! xx
i looooove this story...jake kinda acts lyk a jerk...nd embry is sweet if i got to choose who i wanted to b my bestfriend out of all of them it would be embry :)