Sometimes I Pretend To Be Normal - Comments

I liked this a lot. You did a really good job showing the difference between who the narrator used to be and who she wanted to be- or rather, didn't want to be.

The way you ended it was just vague enough to be ominous without being ~too vague and failing to get its point across.

You did a good job. :]

HEYYY, i told u i would comment on another story and this was my favorite one!! i thought it was so true and i could feel the passion you have towards writing!! U should continue to write and i will probably read all of ur stories like....right now!! :D