October 23rd, 2010 at 11:20pm
This is really....interesting :) The title, the summary, and the chapter title are all really imaginative and were the reason I clicked on this story, so nice job on that.
I like how...short and simple this is, for a short and simple concept. The last line definitely adds a lot of depth too, at least for me. This is somethign t
What I meant to say at the end was 'This is something that could mean a lot of different things...and I really love that.'