The Girl Who Cried Blood... - Comments

SweetDaydreams21 (100)

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Here from comment swap! The layout was a bit distracting to me, but that's alright, it doesn't change the story itself. You did great with your descriptions and elaborating on the emotions assigned to each character, I was instantly drawn in to the story. Good job :)

July 6th, 2012 at 02:41am

Bethyyy the broken (100)

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thank you, i'm kind of lacking ideas right now :P i must admit i haven't writen anything for a while x

July 3rd, 2012 at 09:11am

hidans_hoe (150)

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Comment swap!
Wow! What an intense first chapter! It really grabs your attention and leaves you wanting more. I personally love violent stories/chapters like this one. The plot is very interesting. You are a wonderful writing. :D

July 3rd, 2012 at 05:27am

Bethyyy the broken (100)

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can't believe that it's been a year, sorry guys, anyone want me to try and rewrite this? x

June 25th, 2012 at 07:09pm

Bethyyy the broken (100)

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ONE MORE EXAM LEFT NEXT FRIDAY :D:D:D:D:D:D more writing hopefully :p x

June 10th, 2011 at 11:38am

Bethyyy the broken (100)

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WRITERS BLOCKKKKK :'( x i shall try to update but i need ideasssssss x

February 27th, 2011 at 05:17pm

Universally Known (100)

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:) I'm sure you'll do splendidly on your exams :)

January 19th, 2011 at 02:53am

Bethyyy the broken (100)

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lol nice =[ same gotta revise for exams xx

January 18th, 2011 at 04:21pm

Universally Known (100)

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I haven't been able to write jack shit lately...lol

January 18th, 2011 at 03:03am

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no, they ar old, that's just my signature

January 18th, 2011 at 03:02am

Bethyyy the broken (100)

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yours? lol you back writing again?
xx my new story is terrible i think lol =]xxx

January 17th, 2011 at 06:39pm

Universally Known (100)

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yeah, we are hoping to speed up the writing process soon, so any ideas you may have would be very welcome :):):):)

January 17th, 2011 at 06:32pm

Bethyyy the broken (100)

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lol yeah
well all:
ideas,
co-writers and comments welcome thanks :D xx

January 16th, 2011 at 06:15pm

SadieWitch (100)

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Just read all chapters and I have to say they are very well written.
I would love to read more.

January 16th, 2011 at 07:40am

Bethyyy the broken (100)

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chapter 3 DONE ;)xx

November 11th, 2010 at 08:36pm

Bethyyy the broken (100)

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I'll try sorry if i don't update, it's just these next few weeks i have exams so it might not be so often as me and you would like....:)x thanks for commenting xx

November 5th, 2010 at 04:28pm