I really love this story, Jane is such a compelling character. She had an eating dissorder i think, or still has one or whatever. :) But seriously this is a really amazing story. :)
Ha, I love Jane's smartass remarks, and Hector. I'm curious to know about her past. I really really really can't wait for the next part. I can only imagine how this trip will go. ;D
Ooh I loved it. I love Janes interaction with Hector and his sisters. I can't wait to find out what happens on this trip, ahaha. I'm sure it'll be interesting. I'm curious to know more about Jane now, after what her mother said. I can't wait to find out!
I really liked this chapter. Don't really know why though. I'm sorry this comment isn't longer, but I need to sleep haha. Hector is a sweetheart, I still love Jane and Landon's relationship even though it's sort of nonexistent. Taylor and Co. is hilarious, she can totally plan out the sex of her babies. x)
I liked this. It was sad, but it was good. It wasn't so depressing that I didn't want to leave the story. It was nice to see a different side of her. And I like Hector. (:
I love the way it's written, just sort of all over the place, just like someone's mind would actually be. I think my favorite chapter's chapter two… I don't know, I just have a thing for couples in stories who aren't all "I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! OH MY GOD! DON'T LEAVE ME!" And Calamity and Landon definitely don't seem like that haha. I'm sad he left, and I sorta wish we got more background on their relationship, but it's probably not all that important to the story. I'm excited to see where this is going.
Anyways, I just wanted to let you know that I really like this story and I'm subscribing and I hope to see more of it soon. (: