Waiting In the Cold - Comments

Can't wait to see how they react to each other's surprises.
Great update!
Can't wait for more!!

Ahh.....welcome back! How I've missed this story soo....
First off Im gonna start by the fact that as usual this whole update was epic on so many levels.
And uhm....yeah, idk im at loss of words right now..
Good job Hails im speechless :P
Favorite Part other than Zach practically throwing Brooklynn off her chair with his superman muscles?
"Probably end up alone with twelve cats."
Yes, that is what I would say in a situation like that....
But before my ADD gets the best of me and I ramble like a two year old,
Im gonna end this with a;
YOU BETTER UPDATE THIS SOON, AND NOT LIKE 7 MILLION YEARS LATER!
<3333

Can't wait to see how this two weeks goes for them as a couple.
Great update!
Can't wait for more!!

I loved it.

Typing out an entire chapter on your phone? Wow. I gotta give you props. It takes me forever just to text a short message, so this must have taken you light years to write. Then again, I do suck at texting and my phone is ancient...
I always love these updates, and I loved the Olympics (U-S-A!), so I can't wait for the update of the championship came (even though I know what happens....).

Yay! An update, loved it. :)

loved the update.
hopefully we find out what is wrong with Darby soon...
please update soon : )

Awee, I'm glad everything is going well for Zach & Brooklyn.
Hopefully, they can figure out what has Darby so upset, other then the camera.
Great update!
Can't wait for more!!

Omg you need to update like now!
awww ebs surprising me? Soo caahute!
Sorry trav he's mine
Wow I would forget the main thing.
Brook and zachs covo? Hilarious,
Uhh_oh.....plz tell me my eggo is not preggo!
Update soon....like tonight, cause I wanna know :p
Kay laaa you bye

Loved it!! Great job..:)

woo I loved it!!!!

Thanks for the comments :D

I did not see that coming with Jessica and Yann. I loved it!

loved the update : )
I'm ready for Zach to be back on the ice... I miss seeing him play
please update soon : )

I would call travis a pussy! Ahaha
I loved this update, but I'm stupid and read the whole last
chapter of let me fall forgetting there was a sequel haha
But it was really really good. I was laughing at my calling trav a pussy in the middle of class
And to be honest I'd proly walk out too.
And I'm so glad brook and zach didn't break up,
Someone had to tell her but it should have been zach ngl
And the whole knee thing made me sad but it was cute how she cared so much.
Loved it, more soon baby girl! <3

awsome update. i love it. this whole series is just great. UPdate again soon =)

Thanks for the comments :)

Yay! I love this story. It is perfect! You do such a great job all the time.

OK, so I just finished reading the first story, & now I'm on the sequel.
I love BOTH!
Can't wait to see just how her & Zach's relationship goes.
Great job on the other story, & great start to this one! =)

Oh my. I'm glad I checked for an update when I did...I wonder who Yann is dating, but I guess I'll find out next chapter? That'll be exciting.