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  • BoringUsername

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    Original stories are love. More soon? :)
    November 3rd, 2010 at 01:48am
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    Chiiiikkkkaaaaa, I like it =) Update soon and I'll help you with the thoughts ting, because n RPing, it's cool to put -(insert motion here)-But when you're writing a story, it ust looks kind of messy >.<
    October 27th, 2010 at 04:49pm
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    I like it, if I can just suggest something...I wouldn't have the dialog as tiny print and part of the paragraph. Keep the dialog sperate from the rest of what is going on in the story. And maybe replace some of the she's with her name. But other than that it's good. Keep it up =)
    October 27th, 2010 at 05:44am
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    hey i really like! update soon its going greatXD
    October 25th, 2010 at 05:56pm
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    hey i really like! update soon its going greatXD
    October 25th, 2010 at 05:56pm
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    October 25th, 2010 at 05:56pm
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    October 25th, 2010 at 05:56pm
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