I'll Stand By Your Side - Comments

  • Unexpected.

    Unexpected. (100)

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    ah, it's so cute!
    i think it'd make for a good story line, y'know?
    anyway, i really enjoyed it(=.
    hope you do good!
    October 26th, 2010 at 11:19pm
  • IxJustxLaugh

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    This was so good. It really went with the picture perfectly. :)
    October 26th, 2010 at 02:09am
  • polka dot perfection

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    this was adorable...
    and if i saw the guy fro noah's pic in the mall, I'd jump his sexy ass....
    srry, that was the other half of my brain getting it's two cents in.
    but this was soooo cute. :D
    October 26th, 2010 at 01:19am
  • tiffany danielle

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    This was really really adorable. :)
    I enjoyed reading it and only found one thing to disagree with.

    And I was just there at his side, awkwardly skinny with alabaster skin and startling blue eyes.
    If Noah is making himself sound dull and unnoticable in comparison to his lovely partner, would "startling" really be the apporiate word for Noah to choose? It feels like you slipped out of character here and went to yours, aha. Eh, it's prolly just me but it bothered me so I felt like pointing this little bit out. (:

    But like I said, I do love this.<3 It was very easy to keep focus on and read, and it had a bunch of sweet moments.<3 Your detail was also very nice. It's obvious you're an amazing writer and that you put a great deal of effort into this. (:

    I enjoyed reading this.<3 (:
    October 25th, 2010 at 11:18pm
  • nicholas joseph;

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    GAHHHKKKK.
    ihate, no love, no no, i do hate you. i just do. i'm extremely jealous of your writing skills. you suck. think your writing is fantastic ^__^
    <333

    Both boys are amazingly gorgeous. *w*

    Noah's mum can go suck my dick.

    That oneshot was adorableeeeeeeeeeeeee. c:
    <333333
    October 25th, 2010 at 10:47pm
  • notrelevant

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    i loved this!
    it's the best one shot i've ever read, actually.
    i love how sweet it is, in a not-so-fluffy way.
    and...i love how their families hate each other.
    this is really realistic, too.
    you're a really, really good writer :D
    October 25th, 2010 at 10:41pm