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Oooh yay!! Please do more soon, soo hooked! :D

Oooh yay!! Please do more soon, soo hooked! :D

Oooh yay!! Please do more soon, soo hooked! :D

I was actually gonna quote the same line as Andie as that made me giggle with how true it probably is.
Considering Morgan's reaction to Jimmy, you can tell she's gonna get on with the guys just fine. I loved the way they all had snakes for her and for a second I was half expecting there to be a live snake in that luggage compartment, but he wouldn't do that to Anna, would he?
I loved it, but I am slightly worried about shit hitting the fan at some point. More soon? :)

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"Man Gates, even the babies think you're purtee!"

..let's face it,that man could probably charm the birds off the trees with that "so damn pretty it should be against the law" face of his ;)

I loved how each of the guys made a point of introducing themselves to Morgan as soon as they got off the bus, and of course inundating her with rubber snakes was a guaranteed certainty to get into her good books. But I also love how by doing that they were welcoming her into "the family"...that kid's going to be in for some crazy times. Man I'm jealous. But of course, Brian the boy wonder couldn't be outdone. The cuddly purple and black snake was a surefire way of getting into Morgan's good books, and it definitely seemed to work :D

I'm so looking forward to seeing how the three of them get on with starting out on their new life together as a family. I've no doubt there's going to be a few trials and tribulations along the way, but all families, even those that haven't finally come together after years of not knowing one another have those, but I have a feeling that even during the rough times, there's going to be a certain young man that's going to make sure they get through them unscathed :)

Hubby, I loved this update, and of course, I love you. More whenever you get the chance..pretty please? ;) <3 xxx

I was concernd there would be a live snake in the compartment when Brian walked over there and as much as Morgan would have liked that it would have terrified me so yay for purple and black snake monster. I used to have one of those BTW, well it was my moms, she and some of her friends took it to the Duran Duran concert back in the 80's. I loved that thing, it was might cuddly.

I love how Morgan called out both Zacky and Jimmy. I think she is going to fit in with that bunch just fine. But how cute was he's even prettier in person!! A big awww moment and I find aww moments just as amazing as nail biting ones.

I can't wait to see how they all begin to settle in to each other as this progresses. I know there will be hard times to come but with the 3 of them, even tho Morgan has a brutal childhood I think they will be fine. More please....I'll make you brownies. :D *smoochies*

AWWW I loved this chapter!! It made me laugh so hard aahaha Brian was fucking smart ahahah Awesome! great update :)

By the sounds of things I don't think Morgan is going to have any trouble when it comes to meeting Brian. I loved the way she spoke to him on the phone and I also love the way Brian is being with her already. I think the two of them will get on fine and I can't wait for the two of them to meet finally.

Loved it, as always <3

I'm with Anna, no snakes please. Not even fake ones!!

I love the way their relastionship is developing. I know it's got to be hard on both of them, but it's nice seeing her adjust so well to the new life. And the fact that Brian is trying his best to be there even if he isn't physical melts my heart. I know you worried when you did the plot twist, but you've got quite a gem on your hands here and I cannot wait to read more. <333

Awwww that's so sweet ! Brian being all cutie .. love this!

This story & the prequel are both badass. I'm glad Anna decided to find Morgan. Their relationship seems to be starting out well. Morgan is something else, though. Haha. It should be pretty interesting when she meets Brian. Keep up the good work. (:

I loved this chapter. It showed the blossoming relationship between Anna and Morgan, and that there is a bond of trust forming there for Morgan to be able to tell Anna what had been going on in school. It also showed the signs of what could be a promising start to the relationship between Brian and Morgan. That however is something that will be interesting to watch, as whilst she may be fine with him now, how will Morgan feel and react when she doesn't have Anna's complete undivided attention once Brian is finally home?
As for Brian, he's proving just how much he loves Anna by wanting to be a part of Morgan's upbringing and clearly sees them as a family already, which is just wonderful :)

As always hubby, I loved this and am really looking forward to reading what happens when Brian and Morgan finally meet <333 xxxx

*creeps out of her shell* =)

I hope they keep up with the play therapy. It's a great tool for kids, especially abused kids, as they will sometimes act out what happened to them. I hope that Morgan can get the help she needs and hopefully, everyone can be a family!

Wow, that was a secret and a half Anna was keeping there, but I'm so glad she decided to go and find her daughter. And god bless Brian for being so understanding. I have a feeling that although it may be a little tough at times, they're going to end up a wonderful little family. Morgan has clearly been through some extremely tough times, but now that she's with Anna, they'll both realise that they've found the missing piece to their lives and things will only get better.

I absolutely loved the twist hubby, and can't wait for more :) xxxx

The thought of that poor girl being abused by the people who were meant to be caring for her makes me sick to my stomach.
I know its going to be hard and gonna take a lot of therapy but I'm sure things will work out for them, that kid deserves to finally be happy!

More soon? xx

Why aren't you happy with it? I mean it shows the building of the relationship between Morgan her mom and that is important. I still think that Morgan has underlying issues about what she's been through, but right now I think she's happy to be with her birth mom so it isn't really appearing yet, does that make sense? But that being said I think this is a vital part for both of them to get to know one another. I know Anna wants to make everything she's been through right, and I think she's well on her way to doing that I just hope she doesn't try to spoil Morgan with monetary things instead of the love the child is most likely craving. I am interested to find out how Brian is going to adapt to being a dad, and something tells me that might be when Morgan freaks out a bit. The way she knew what rape was, I have a sick feeling in the pit of my stomach. <33

Morgan sounds like an absolute pleasure, but my heart is breaking thinking of all she must have been put through in care.
I hope things continue to go as smoothly with her and Anna and that she likes Brian when he gets back.

Loved it, more soon please? xx

Ok WTF? I was totally blown away with the twist in this. First she is all happy with Brian, she freaks out breaks up with him and then Brent shows back up. I'm taking it the brothers made up? And then Michelle goes all Lizzy Borden, well not really but you get the gist of what I'm saying and then THEN it turns out Anna has a kid? Yeah you've really mind fucked me but I sort of like that. You think outside the box and even the plot twists still keeps me drawn in, but one thing....now that i'm caught up you know what this means, right? MORE....*whistles and scampers away* but not before hitting subscribe.

Loved it!

such a major plot twist thats awesome! i cant wait to read more this story is amazing!!!