Oh, wow! I loved this! I'm glad it was finished before I started reading. I'd have been sooooo impatient if I had to wait for the end! Great job and good look in the contest :D
You are a very talented writer, I like how you're following a story line throughout the chapters and adding the theme into it as if it was going to turn out like that without the theme. :)
I loved the theme and how you connected them all together. :) This was great! :D