Very goood. That stuff at the end was the cutest thing ever! :) More chapters though, and I do kinda like your idea about Charley when she grows up, but I feel like I need more Justin and Mack! :) I think I'll cry when this ends! ;)
OMG YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE NOW THAT EVERYTHING IS SORTED OUT I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT (if you were wondering i always need to know what happens next) SO PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE THE STORY ALL OF YOUR STORIES TOO OKAY
oh yeah we need a whole hell of a lot more drama. I love this story soooo much. And there should be some random thing that happens on Mack and JB's wedding day
I like how you did Mallory's point of view. It helped get the chapter's point across. and Mack and Justin are too adorable! I'm absolutely, no doubt, in love with this story. You're a talented writer. :)
i still wannah know what thee motherr lover slipped her ! , was it a flippin` ambien or something? , smh....messing up a perfectly not normal crazy relationship between justin &+ mack.#StupidIssac!