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  • raNdOMly_AweSoMe.

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    okay so i just started this story today and IM IN LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i also read your Christmas one-shots and now you are my favorite author on this site!!!!! i know that some day you will have books and whatnot in stores in everything and i look forward to the day that i buy one!!! :D anyway love this story and if this is awkward sorry but i love you too for just being an awesome writer!!! <3333333333333333333333333333333 :D
    August 8th, 2011 at 02:19am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    Loved! <3
    August 7th, 2011 at 06:20am
  • Crash Thrusts.

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    I thought that was a really sweet chapter. Zacky's text messages to her were so cute, I thought "aw..." and it almost makes me not get my chainsaw out. XD It was a really lovely read and I can't wait for the next chapter and then the sequel. :) <3
    August 5th, 2011 at 06:45am
  • SynysterNightmare

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    Love this story. :)
    August 5th, 2011 at 12:06am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    Great updates! <3
    August 4th, 2011 at 08:24am
  • Undead Angel

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    I just got finished reading all of this story so far, took me a few days but I absolutely love it. First off, the layout is really nice (something that I'll admit always draws me into a story.) Also your writing style is perfect, you don't give too much unwanted detail, but you give the perfect amount of descriptions so the story doesn't rush itself to quickly. Also, the fact that this story goes a lot slower then most student/teacher stories is something I enjoy too. I dislike when stories rush into things too quickly. The plot is great, and I love that you have so many different conflicts interfering with Zack and Kayla's relationship. The fact that you're writing a sequel makes me happy, because I do think that the situation of abuse between the couple was not fully resolved. I can't wait to finish reading the rest of this, and I am very excited for the sequel. Keep writing, you deserve all the comments and subscriptions on this. :)
    July 31st, 2011 at 09:21pm
  • inwonderland.

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    Dude why does her dad have to be a douche? Seriously. I hope Zack doesn't react horribly.
    July 27th, 2011 at 04:53am
  • Rocket Queen

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    I ADORE this story already, as I've already told you. ;) Teacher/student relationships are one of my guilty pleasures. But one of the things that sets yours apart from most is that you're factoring abuse into the situation. Which is totally what I believe most of these relationships are like because the adult is usually just abusing their power of being an authority figure to the student.

    I haven't gotten that far into the story yet, but I really can't wait to read the part where the situation starts to take a bad turn. As weird as that sounds. I just can't wait to see how you handle it.

    Oh, and my favourite line from the last chapter I read was: "His exact words were, ‘you’ll have so many detentions that by the end of the year, you’ll have a hundred percent,’ or something like that."

    Lol, that sounds like such a teenage thing to say. They're usually contradicting themselves. XD

    Ah I LOVE how you included Jimmy and the thing with the duck. XD

    Oooh you know what's funny? In the first chapter when the whole cheating thing first happened, I had the same thoughts of "I think Zack wrote the paper himself so it was identical." Methinks I'm right? But I guess I'll have to keep reading to find out. :)

    He told her to bend over and grabbed her ass? Wow, NICE. :P
    July 26th, 2011 at 10:42pm
  • inwonderland.

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    Awwwh, she's avoiding him. I wonder what he must think of that. I can't wait for the graduation ceremony.
    July 26th, 2011 at 06:33am
  • Mandyy-_-Massacre

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    EEP!!! I'm in love with this story-btw(:
    Actually,i love your writing!!
    And :O Mr.Baker is bein' a little naughty,huh? X) Can't wait for an update!!!
    July 21st, 2011 at 06:37am
  • adam driver.

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    Extra Credit Kayla, I love you, but come on! It's Zacky V! I'd be like, "Spank me again! And again! Punch me in the face while you're at it." *sigh* so glad tomorrow's graduation for her. :)
    July 21st, 2011 at 03:42am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    Loved it! <3
    Can't wait for more!
    July 14th, 2011 at 02:46am
  • SpencerG

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    Words can not express the feelings I feel right now after reading the sex scene!! I want some, no all, of the stuff she bought from Leather N' Lace. I wish I knew about a store like that. I would be working there, full-time! ;)
    But this was a great chapter!! I can't wait for them to have more sex, and to read another chapter but until then... ^_^
    July 14th, 2011 at 01:08am
  • inwonderland.

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    Oh poor Kayla. She's gonna feel that in the morning.
    July 13th, 2011 at 07:04pm
  • inwonderland.

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    Grrrrrrrrrrrr! Peterson makes me mad, but this time, I think he might care for her some. Anyways, please update!
    July 10th, 2011 at 06:28am
  • Yay Its Alex!

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    I keep thinking about the sequel. I am worried yet interested as hell. Mr.Peterson confused my thoguhts about Zacky as fuck.
    I need more chapters! Please.
    July 7th, 2011 at 11:20am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    Looking forward to the next! <3
    July 7th, 2011 at 05:47am
  • krys69123

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    OHHHH! *growl* I just want to punch him in the FACE! among other much needed body parts ... *grumbles* but I love that she was able to shove it in his face :D I would LOVE to see him get some charges for stalking and harassment... OH! and laying his hands on a student XD Wouldn't that just burn him up inside :P Love it can't wait til next week :)
    July 7th, 2011 at 03:13am
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    Mr. Peterson is a DICK!
    Glad she told him off like she did!
    July 7th, 2011 at 01:41am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    Hmm can't wait to see how things turn out! <3
    July 3rd, 2011 at 04:29am