I love that Zacky really cares about her, and that he wants to change for her. I'm also glad she wants to take those big steps with him, and that she by doing that, shows him how much she loves him.
DAAAAAAAAAAAH! He wants to meet her mommmmmmmm, Omgosh this chapter was so amazing. Jess... I want to murder her with spoons and sticks of butter! Dx How could you do that to your best friend? Seriously. Dying slowly as I wait. <3shy
Ahhhhh! I love you! You're putting up a sequel! Yay! Her mom needs to just fucking accept it and move on!! Is Matt gonna be okay? He seemed kinda mad that he didn't find out about Zack and Kayla till it was let out. Anyways, Jess and Kayla need to talk. Seriously.
I love it! A sequel?!?!?! YAY! *dances* I can't wait!!!! I really hope that the talk with her mom isn't as bad as I am picturing it. I don't see her mom ever accepting him completely but I can see sooner or later she will have to let her daughter take chances and live her own life or not be a part of it. Monday can hurry up now!
Okay, so I've been reading your story non stop and at every moment I can. And I'm gonna tell you that the chapter labeled 'Talking Dirty' made me cry. Which is not easy to do. :) I cant wait to read more!
So. I started reading this story last night, and I've spent most of the day finishing it. I freaking love it! This is probably one of the best stories I've read! You have few/none grammar mistakes, and you describe everything so detailed! It's easy to keep up with the storyline, it's effing perfect!
Peterson... I hate him. If I were Kayla, I'd turn around on my heel Or... Maybe not.. Bu I still hate him! That ass. Or. I'm glad he didn't put charges against Zacky, so.. But that's probably the only good thing he's ever done. Now I'm just scared for her mother, and what will happen between them. They both deserve to be happy!
HOLY SHIT. Peterson? Peterson of all people?? By the way, it was totes cute when she gave him his shoes and socks. But anyway, I wonder what Z's gonna find as a hobby. And I wonder what Kayla will do with Peterson as her teacher. Holy balls shit fucking cock ass. On edge dude. Yer killin' meh. Amazing as always though.
Oh god, I would of been banging my head against the desk going, "fuck my fucking life" over and over again. I hope that her mom doesn't freak out about last night. Please update. :)
Ohh shit Peterson is teaching English!! I think I would transfer out of that English class, saying that I was afraid of him harassing me about me and Zacky or something. Good chapter by the way; I can't wait to read the next one. But until then...
I want it twice a week but then I think it'll end while I'm away and I don't want to miss it. But then once a week is too long to wait between updates.
I just read all 60 chapters in one sitting and I want more! I love, love, love this story! I vote for twice a week because I am addicted and can't wait for more! I love how you have the Avenged guys but they aren't in the band :) I can't wait!