Reverie. - Comments

The layout is really pretty. I love the background color, and that banner is cool. :) I love the tone you set up in the very first paragraph: oh, it’s so lovely outside nothing bad should happen ladadadadaaa~ I love irony. I sort of assumed it would be a whole daydream simply by the way she was reacting. I really love the comical effects, such as the gun being as big as a loaf of bread. I had quite a boring job over the summer, and when I was doing something really monotonous I would come up with the most fabulous story/RP ideas ever. I’m glad to see I’m not the only one with an overactive imagination. ;) Nice job!

Well dang. :D That was kind of funny. I was all ready for her to die...but she didn't. :D Loved it!

I like your layout! The black outline of the text looks really good :]. I don't mean to be mean or anything, but I believe it is spelled like neighborhood, but I couldn't be sure. I wonder what this whole thing that happened to her is :/. She's getting robbed, holy shit, not good! Holy shit! that woman just had her whole brains shot through ughh. And oh gosh, this girl s getting enjoyment out of this xD. Oh gosh this was like al ittle day dream of hers? haha. Well ether way, i liked it :]

asking alex. took the words right out of my mouth, right down to the irony. It was perfect - plus, I'm diggin' the old register machine - and amazing and maybe even a little funny. I love the details in this and I loved the fact that her boredom caused her to dream up the robbery. xD Like I said, it's perfect. I really enjoyed this (: <3

Haha! This was hilarious. Not in a way that I laughed my ass off, but it was ironic. I love ironic stories better than anything, and you have made my day with this. It was so simple, yet description and creativity oozed from it. Fantastic job well done, m'dear.

PS. Your username makes me smile. :)