The Devil's Plaything - Comments

I've already told you this at the other place but it bears repeating....more please!!! Oh and so everyone here knows as well I F'n Love You right back! *kisses*

Coming to terms. That's what I like to see.
That's okay. Brian's bed is calling all the way from California.
;D

i can't wait to read what Asher has to say about the whole situation

Great update, I can't wait to see what happens next! :D

Well damn I am such a good friend. But honestly, that would be the exact same thing I would tell Adri if it was actually me. And I'm glad the push to go to Cali was in there, it really sets up the plot and gets me really excited to read the next update. Although, I usually always am. xD
I still love the fact that my character is with Jimmy. We'll treat Adri right if she goes to California, which I'm sure she will. :D
Fucking Asher, I hope he flips a bitch. But if he hurts her, I will cut his throat. >.>
Loved the update baby, please update again soooon! :) <33

Well damn I am such a good friend. But honestly, that would be the exact same thing I would tell Adri if it was actually me. And I'm glad the push to go to Cali was in there, it really sets up the plot and gets me really excited to read the next update. Although, I usually always am. xD
I still love the fact that my character is with Jimmy. We'll treat Adri right if she goes to California, which I'm sure she will. :D
Fucking Asher, I hope he flips a bitch. But if he hurts her, I will cut his throat. >.>
Loved the update baby, please update again soooon! :) <33

the only thing running through my mind now is 'give me more!'
this story is really addicting

Ummmmmmm....more more more more more more.

I must agree, your desciptions in this are so vivid, you feel like you're right there. I love this more aggresive, yet patient side of Jimmy. But you know how much I adore Jimmy, in any light. Er um dark would be more fitting for this. ;o)

Wow there is def a spark between Adri and Zacky, but something tells me from the reaction of the others Brian will not be too pleased about that. You've got it set up great and i insist now that you'll be a woman of the world later this evening that you update again soon. I need it like a drug....<3333

Rev and I make a DAMN good couple. I mean really. He's so affectionate, I love it. Maybe that's because I knew if I was in a relationship, I'd be so fucking affectionate that I'd want the other person to be affectionate to. So, that pretty much made my day.
Secondly, three of the guys have been introduced, I love it! Except for Zachary, he's not really sitting well with me. He keeps going on about stuff he knows he should shut up about, but he just keeps going on and on. And from what I can tell, while we're in New York, I'm the mom. xD I seriously felt like that, having to keep all the guys in line. :P
I can't wait until Brian is introduced into the story. I feel like shit is going to hit the fucking fan. It's going to be crazy.
Lastly, I have to say your descriptions are absolutely magnificent and stunning. You describe people and places so well, it makes the story that much more enjoyable to read.
Loved the update bby, can't wait for the next update. I'm always so fucking happy when this is updated. :) <33

This story... It gives me the chills. Literally.
It's so wonderful. Perfection, really. I can't get enough. It drives me crazy in the most amazing way. I really can't wait for another update.

This is awesome lol I'm so happy that yu updated

Well since you never updated this in the secret place I had to come here to read it. And imagine my surprise. I fucking love this and what you're doing. Seriously, this is amazing and you know how I am about my vamps.

I don't much care for Asher, he seems like a selfish prick, and it wouldn't surprise me in the least to find out the late hours entails a little extra curricular activity with someone else in the office. He just seems the type to me. And if he's as invested in this relationship with Adrianna as he says, he would make the effort to be there. He really isn't, instead he is trying to lay it all on her.

Not saying I condone her cheating on him. I don't, but the way I perceive it, she really didn't have control of herself as she might have normally. And let's face it, who could deny Brian even if they weren't compelled? Not me, and I admit that freely.

I love Reese. I knew when they were in the cafe when she started talking about her boyfriend and his friend....it just clicked she was there for Adri. She even said so in a sort of subtle way. And when Jimmy showed up, Reese had to talk him down...I got the chills. So I'm now subscribing to this but I still expect you to go visit the secret place and update this there as well. And i'll also be nagging the shit out of you on twitter now that I've gotten all caught up. MUST HAVE MORE!! Love you baby!! <333

You have to post more often I LOVE THIS STORY SOOOOO MUCH!!!!!

More more more!!!!!!! i love it!!! :D

lol, loved!

I just get so giddy inside when I get e-mails about updates for this story! It makes me so excited yet anxious at the same time. It's so great, for a lack of better terms, and I'm drooling for more!

Great update, I've def missed this story lol update soon please! :D

PS, I want to know a little back story about mine and Jimmy's relationship, even if you don't put it in the story. ;)

sldkfjeoifje. URGH. Fucking Asher. At first I honestly and truly felt bad for the poor guy because Adri had cheated on him. Now I think he's a huge asshole and it's making me mad. lol. First of all,for him to forget their anniversary is just plain awful and secondly, him putting his hands on a woman is disgusting.Also, Adri's outfit to go out sounds so fucking badass. I have decided that you must come to Canada and dress me. :)) NOW GET ON A PLANE.

The tension by no means left Jimmy’s body, but he bowed his head and quickly pressed a kiss to Theresa’s forehead before stepping away and retreating from the room. This was my absolute fucking favourite part. Oh god, I was squealing with how adorable it was. I seriously stopped reading and just kept rereading that single sentence. Oh man, you are so amazing. That was so cute I was fangirling like I've never fangirled before. ;)
Also, Jimmy sounds so fucking hot here. I'm interested to see how he'll behave on their night out, and who they might run into on this night out. I'm curious as to if Jimmy is super affectionate to my character while they're out. Right now he's kind of intimidating. (I'm hoping he's affectionate. LMFAO).
Loved it baby, it's worth the wait everytime. You are a marvelous writer, I simply cannot calm down about this until I get the next chapter. ;) <33

I need to know what will happen next, it is killing me! lol great chapter, I cant wait for the next!